~ 1900 words ~70 amendments / insertions in RED — ~ 10 required deletions in [BLUE]
fitting out » fitting-out lower ground » lower-ground
top floor » top-floor ground floor » ground-floor fourth floor » fourth-floor
two storey » 2-storey 3 storey » 3-storey four storey » 4-storey six storey » 6-storey [consistency]
high tech » high-tech high rise » high-rise
new built » newly built feel of » feeling of
4 UK verses US spellings — paneling » panelling neighboring » neighbouring
modernization » modernisation centered » centred
MIS-SPELLING/CAPITALISATION :- where » were georgian » Georgian
client have » has (singular - but in fact word was deleted)
some 'strictly-incorrect' capitalisation left for effect, others I have suggested using lowercase
~ 15 of the changes were just insertion of a comma as punctuation in a longish sentence,
plus ~ 4 comma deletions, to improve readability
insertion of missing the or a in a few places, so less 'note-like' +
switching of the with a & vice-sersa
gap between sentences increased to 2 spaces by inserting a non-breaking space ( in HTML )
after the full-stop at the end of preceding sentence — BUT this is merely a personal preference …